BOOK
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Leaves of Grass
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Review by Edward Tanguay November 20, 1995 |
Above all, Whitman wants to get personal with YOU,
the reader:
STRANGER, if you passing meet
me and desire to speak to me, why
should you not speak to me?
And why should I not speak
to you?
In his poem "To a Stranger," he
indentifies you and talks to you. You have
to confront him as a poet who wants to have a
personal relationship:
PASSING stranger! you do not
know how longingly I look upon you,
You must be he I was
seeking, or she I was seeking, (it comes to me
as of a dream,)
I have somewhere surely
lived a life of joy with you,
All is recall'd as we flit
by each other, fluid, affectionate,
chaste, matured,
You grew up with me, were a
boy with me or a girl with me,
I ate with you and slept
with you, your body has become not yours
only nor left my body mine
only,
You give me the pleasure of
your eyes, face, flesh, as we pass, you
take of my beard, breast,
hands, in return,
I am not to speak to you, I
am to think of you when I sit alone or
wake at night alone,
I am to wait, I do not
doubt I am to meet you again,
I am to see to it that I do
not lose you
.Soon you
realize that back in the mid 19th century, he had thought of YOU
and had waited until you picked up his book and
started a relationship with
him. It gets a bit eerie:
Full of Life Now
FULL of life now, compact,
visible,
I, forty years old the
eighty-third year of the States,
To one a century hence or
any number of centuries hence,
To you yet unborn these,
seeking you.
When you read these I that
was visible am become invisible,
Now it is you, compact,
visible, realizing my poems, seeking me,
Fancying how happy you were
if I could be with you and become your
comrade;
Be it as if I were with
you. (Be not too certain but I am now with
you.)
Reading this book is an invitation. You embark on
a trip with a loving and
caring teacher:
I tramp a perpetual journey, (come
listen all!)
My signs are a rain-proof
coat, good shoes, and a staff cut from the
woods,
No friend of mine takes his
ease in my chair,
I have no chair, no church,
no philosophy,
I lead no man to a
dinner-table, library, exchange,
But each man and each woman
of you I lead upon a knoll,
My left hand hooking you
round the waist,
My right hand pointing to
landscapes of continents and the public
road.
Although Whitman writes endless praises of
America, he really isn't waving
an American flag. What is he waving? What is he
championing? It is
democracy, the inclusion of all things and all
people. There is nothing
that Whitman does not want to include. In
"Salut au Monde!" he includes the
whole world, praising every part of it. (This poem
would be a great
backbone to teach a geography class.)
You whoever you are!
You daughter or son of
England!
You of the mighty Slavic
tribes and empires! you Russ in Russia!
You dim-descended, black,
divine-soul'd African, large, fine-headed,
nobly-form'd, superbly
destin'd, on equal terms with me!
You Norwegian! Swede! Dane!
Icelander! you Prussian!
You Spaniard of Spain! you
Portuguese!
You Frenchwoman and
Frenchman of France!
You Belge! you
liberty-lover of the Netherlands! (you stock whence I
myself have descended;)
You sturdy Austrian! you
Lombard! Hun! Bohemian! farmer of Styria!
You neighbor of the Danube!
You working-man of the
Rhine, the Elbe, or the Weser! you
working-woman too!
You Sardinian! you
Bavarian! Swabian! Saxon! Wallachian! Bulgarian!
You Roman! Neapolitan! you
Greek!
You lithe matador in the
arena at Seville!
You mountaineer living
lawlessly on the Taurus or Caucasus!
You Bokh horse-herd
watching your mares and stallions feeding!
You beautiful-bodied
Persian at full speed in the saddle shooting
arrows to the mark!
You Chinaman and Chinawoman
of China! you Tartar of Tartary!
You women of the earth
subordinated at your tasks!
You Jew journeying in your
old age through every risk to stand once
on Syrian ground!
You other Jews waiting in
all lands for your Messiah!
You thoughtful Armenian
pondering by some stream of the Euphrates!
you peering amid the ruins
of Nineveh! you ascending
mount Ararat!
You foot-worn pilgrim
welcoming the far-away sparkle of the minarets
of Mecca!
You sheiks along the
stretch from Suez to Bab-el-mandeb ruling your
families and tribes!
You olive-grower tending
your fruit on fields of Nazareth, Damascus,
or lake Tiberias!
You Thibet trader on the
wide inland or bargaining in the shops of
Lassa!
You Japanese man or woman!
you liver in Madagascar, Ceylon, Sumatra,
Borneo!
All you continentals of
Asia, Africa, Europe, Australia, indifferent
of place!
All you on the numberless
islands of the archipelagoes of the sea!
And you of centuries hence
when you listen to me!
And you each and everywhere
whom I specify not, but include just the
same!
Health to you! good will to you
all, from me and America sent!
Each of us inevitable,
Each of us limitless-each
of us with his or her right upon the
earth,
Each of us allow'd the
eternal purports of the earth,
Each of us here as divinely
as any is here.
And you have to admire Whitman's egoism:
I sat studying at the feet of the
great masters,
Now if eligible O that the
great masters might return and study me.
And Whitman loves the human
body! He loves YOUR body and HIS body and
EVERYbody's body! For him
the body is divine; it is the soul; it is all
there is and it should be
worshipped and loved and looked at and felt:
Behold, the body includes
and is the meaning, the main concern and
includes and is the soul;
Whoever you are, how superb
and how divine is your body, or any part
of it!
There is no better celebration of the body in this
book than in the poem "I
Sing The Body Electric":
I have perceiv'd that to be with
those I like is enough,
To stop in company with the
rest at evening is enough,
To be surrounded by
beautiful, curious, breathing, laughing flesh is
enough,
To pass among them or touch
any one, or rest my arm ever so lightly
round his or her neck for a
moment, what is this then?
I do not ask any more
delight, I swim in it as in a sea.
There is something in
staying close to men and women and looking
on them, and in the contact
and odor of them, that pleases
the soul well,
All things please the soul,
but these please the soul well.
There is nothing on the body that is not holy. All
parts of the body are
equal, like a good democracy. He praises all body
parts:
Divine am I inside and out, and I
make holy whatever I touch or am
touch'd from,
The scent of these arm-pits
aroma finer than prayer,
This head more than
churches, bibles, and all the creeds.
Whitman is starting a new era. Do not worship
things of the past but
worship things that exist today. Worship the
common place, the carpenters
pounding hammers, the bugs crawling in the ground,
the plants in your yard,
the computer you are sitting at (Walt would have
praised it if he had had
one!). Everything is holy NOW!
There was never any more inception
than there is now,
Nor any more youth or age
than there is now,
And will never be any more
perfection than there is now,
Nor any more heaven or hell
than there is now.
I like section 11 in "Song of Myself."
It's a riddle that you can figure
out. What is going on here? Who is watching whom?
Is it a fantasy of the
woman? It is interesting erotic but doesn't tell
too much. Nicely done.
Twenty-eight young men bathe by
the shore,
Twenty-eight young men and
all so friendly;
Twenty-eight years of
womanly life and all so lonesome.
She owns the fine house by
the rise of the bank,
She hides handsome and
richly drest aft the blinds of the window.
Which of the young men does
she like the best?
Ah the homeliest of them is
beautiful to her.
Where are you off to, lady?
for I see you,
You splash in the water
there, yet stay stock still in your room.
Dancing and laughing along
the beach came the twenty-ninth
bather,
The rest did not see her,
but she saw them and loved them.
The beards of the young men
glisten'd with wet, it ran from their
long hair,
Little streams pass'd all
over their bodies.
An unseen hand also pass'd
over their bodies,
It descended tremblingly
from their temples and ribs.
The young men float on
their backs, their white bellies bulge to the
sun, they do not ask who
seizes fast to them,
They do not know who puffs
and declines with pendant and bending
arch,
They do not think whom they
souse with spray.
He includes everybody from whores to the President
all on an equal basis,
just naming them all off as equal parts of America
and of Mr. Whitman. He's
going to praise them all!
The opium-eater reclines with
rigid head and just-open'd lips,
The prostitute draggles her
shawl, her bonnet bobs on her tipsy and
pimpled neck,
The crowd laugh at her
blackguard oaths, the men jeer and wink to
each other,
(Miserable! I do not laugh
at your oaths nor jeer you;)
The President holding a
cabinet council is surrounded by the great
Secretaries,
Interestingly he ends this section, after naming
almost every possible
occupation in American, by affirming that all of
these people doing all of
their little, everyday, normal tasks "weave
the song of myself." Whitman is
all of these people. Each person is a strand in
the web that makes up his
all-encompassing person.
And when Whitman starts listing, there is no
stopping him. The word that
names the thing is holy. Listing is prayer for
Whitman. Here is Whitman
listing parts of the human body. It reads like the
index of an anatomy
book:
Head, neck, hair, ears, drop and
tympan of the ears,
Eyes, eye-fringes, iris of
the eye, eyebrows, and the waking or
sleeping of the lids,
Mouth, tongue, lips, teeth,
roof of the mouth, jaws, and the
jaw-hinges,
Nose, nostrils of the nose,
and the partition,
Cheeks, temples, forehead,
chin, throat, back of the neck,
neck-slue,
Strong shoulders, manly
beard, scapula, hind-shoulders, and the
ample side-round of the
chest,
Upper-arm, armpit,
elbow-socket, lower-arm, arm-sinews, arm-bones,
Wrist and wrist-joints,
hand, palm, knuckles, thumb, forefinger,
finger-joints,
finger-nails,
Broad breast-front, curling
hair of the breast, breast-bone,
breast-side,
Ribs, belly, backbone,
joints of the backbone,
Hips, hip-sockets,
hip-strength, inward and outward round,
man-balls, man-root,
Strong set of thighs, well
carrying the trunk above,
Leg-fibres, knee, knee-pan,
upper-leg, under-leg,
Ankles, instep, foot-ball,
toes, toe-joints, the heel;
And here, a list of waterways of the world:
I behold the sail and steamships
of the world, some in clusters in
port, some on their
voyages,
Some double the cape of
Storms, some cape Verde, others capes
Guardafui, Bon, or
Bajadore,
Others Dondra head, others
pass the straits of Sunda, others cape
Lopatka, others Behring's
straits,
Others cape Horn, others
sail the gulf of Mexico or along Cuba or
Hayti, others Hudson's bay
or Baffin's bay,
Others pass the straits of
Dover, others enter the Wash, others the
firth of Solway, others
round cape Clear, others the Land's End,
Others traverse the Zuyder
Zee or the Scheld,
Others as comers and goers
at Gibraltar or the Dardanelles,
Others sternly push their
way through the northern winter-packs,
Others descend or ascend
the Obi or the Lena,
Others the Niger or the
Congo, others the Indus, the Burampooter
and Cambodia,
Others wait steam'd up
ready to start in the ports of Australia,
Wait at Liverpool, Glasgow,
Dublin, Marseilles, Lisbon, Naples,
Hamburg, Bremen, Bordeaux,
the Hague, Copenhagen,
Wait at Valparaiso, Rio
Janeiro, Panama.
And he continues with a list of production tools,
buildings and the like.
Here, he is praising the everyday workman by
naming what he uses:
House-building, measuring, sawing
the boards,
Blacksmithing,
glass-blowing, nail-making, coopering, tin-roofing,
shingle-dressing,
Ship-joining,
dock-building, fish-curing, flagging of sidewalks by
flaggers,
The pump, the pile-driver,
the great derrick, the coal-kiln and
brickkiln,
Coal-mines and all that is
down there, the lamps in the darkness,
echoes, songs, what
meditations, what vast native thoughts
looking through smutch'd
faces,
Iron-works, forge-fires in
the mountains or by river-banks, men
around feeling the melt
with huge crowbars, lumps of ore, the
due combining of ore,
limestone, coal,
The blast-furnace and the
puddling-furnace, the loup-lump at the
bottom of the melt at last,
the rolling-mill, the stumpy bars
of pig-iron, the strong
clean-shaped Trail for railroads,
Oil-works, silk-works,
white-lead-works, the sugar-house,
steam-saws, the great mills
and factories,
Stone-cutting, shapely
trimmings for facades or window or
door-lintels, the mallet,
the tooth-chisel, the jib to protect
the thumb,
The calking-iron, the
kettle of boiling vault-cement, and the fire
under the kettle,
The cotton-bale, the
stevedore's hook, the saw and buck of the
sawyer, the mould of the
moulder, the working-knife of the
butcher, the ice-saw, and
all the work with ice,
The work and tools of the
rigger, grappler, sail-maker, block-maker,
Goods of gutta-percha,
papier-mache, colors, brushes, brush-making,
glazier's implements,
The veneer and glue-pot,
the confectioner's ornaments, the decanter
and glasses, the shears and
flat-iron,
The awl and knee-strap, the
pint measure and quart measure, the
counter and stool, the
writing-pen of quill or metal, the making
of all sorts of edged
tools,
The brewery, brewing, the
malt, the vats, every thing that is done
by brewers, wine-makers,
vinegar-makers,
Leather-dressing,
coach-making, boiler-making, rope-twisting,
distilling, sign-painting,
lime-burning, cotton-picking,
electroplating,
electrotyping, stereotyping,
Stave-machines,
planing-machines, reaping-machines,
ploughing-machines,
thrashing-machines, steam wagons,
The cart of the carman, the
omnibus, the ponderous dray,
Pyrotechny, letting off
color'd fireworks at night, fancy figures
and jets;
Beef on the butcher's
stall, the slaughter-house of the butcher, the
butcher in his
killing-clothes,
The pens of live pork, the
killing-hammer, the hog-hook, the
scalder's tub, gutting, the
cutter's cleaver, the packer's maul,
and the plenteous
winterwork of pork-packing,
Flour-works, grinding of
wheat, rye, maize, rice, the barrels and
the half and quarter
barrels, the loaded barges, the high piles
on wharves and levees,
The men and the work of the
men on ferries, railroads, coasters,
fish-boats, canals;
The hourly routine of your
own or any man's life, the shop, yard,
store, or factory,
These shows all near you by
day and night-workman! whoever you
are, your daily life!
After encompassing everything, Whitman then
encompasses all of Time itself:
It is time to explain myself- let
us stand up.
What is known I strip away,
I launch all men and women
forward with me into the Unknown.
The clock indicates the
moment- but what does eternity indicate?
We have thus far exhausted
trillions of winters and summers,
There are trillions ahead,
and trillions ahead of them.
Births have brought us
richness and variety,
And other births will bring
us richness and variety.
I do not call one greater
and one smaller,
That which fills its period
and place is equal to any.
and he connects all
generations:
This is not only one man,
this the father of those who shall be
fathers in their turns,
In him the start of
populous states and rich republics,
Of him countless immortal
lives with countless embodiments and
enjoyments.
How do you know who shall
come from the offspring of his offspring
through the centuries?
(Who might you find you
have come from yourself, if you could trace
back through the
centuries?)
No matter what it is, Whitman wants to take it in,
experience it, and weave
it into his own self. The following is a powerful
poem about the passive
experiencing of even quite evil things:
I Sit and Look Out
I SIT and look out upon all
the sorrows of the world, and upon all
oppression and shame,
I hear secret convulsive
sobs from young men at anguish with
themselves, remorseful
after deeds done,
I see in low life the
mother misused by her children, dying,
neglected, gaunt,
desperate,
I see the wife misused by
her husband, I see the treacherous seducer
of young women,
I mark the ranklings of
jealousy and unrequited love attempted to be
hid, I see these sights on
the earth,
I see the workings of
battle, pestilence, tyranny, I see martyrs and
prisoners,
I observe a famine at sea,
I observe the sailors casting lots who
shall be kill'd to preserve
the lives of the rest,
I observe the slights and
degradations cast by arrogant persons upon
laborers, the poor, and
upon negroes, and the like;
All these-all the meanness
and agony without end I sitting look out
upon,
See, hear, and am silent.
I like the form of the following poem with its
extensive use of the "ing"
ending. It reads nicely:
We Two Boys Together Clinging
We two boys together
clinging,
One the other never
leaving,
Up and down the roads
going, North and South excursions making,
Power enjoying, elbows
stretching, fingers clutching,
Arm'd and fearless, eating,
drinking, sleeping, loving.
No law less than ourselves
owning, sailing, soldiering, thieving,
threatening,
Misers, menials, priests
alarming, air breathing, water drinking, on
the turf or the sea-beach
dancing,
Cities wrenching, ease
scorning, statutes mocking, feebleness
chasing,
Fulfilling our foray.
And I liked the thought in this poem that love is
always positive and always
creates:
Sometimes with One I Love
SOMETIMES with one I love I
fill myself with rage for fear I effuse
unreturn'd love,
But now I think there is no
unreturn'd love, the pay is certain one
way or another,
(I loved a certain person
ardently and my love was not return'd,
Yet out of that I have
written these songs.)
Whitman is motivating. Whitman is optimistic. No
matter who you are or
what you do, Whitman loves you and wants to tell
you that you are important
and what you do is important:
The question, O me! so sad,
recurring-What good amid these, O me,
O life?
Answer.
That you are here-that life
exists and identity,
That the powerful play goes
on, and you may contribute a verse.
Edward Tanguay
*** Leaves of
Grass, by Walt Whitman
*** SECOND HALF OF BOOK
*** Notes by Edward
Tanguay
*** November 26, 1995
I've collected some of Whitman's reoccurring
themes in this book:
1. celebration of democracy
2. the love the self
3. limitlessness
I do not doubt I am limitless, and
that the universes are limitless,
in vain I try to think how
limitless,
4. a love of American geography and a love of
naming places
Some threading Ohio's farm-fields
or the woods,
Some down Colorado's canons
from sources of perpetual snow,
Some half-hid in Oregon, or
away southward in Texas,
Some in the north finding
their way to Erie, Niagara, Ottawa,
Some to Atlantica's bays,
and so to the great salt brine.
5. Manifest Destiny
6. freedom
7. a realization of death and a continuation of
life
Have you guess'd you yourself
would not continue?
Have you dreaded these
earth-beetles?
Have you fear'd the future
would be nothing to you?
---
If all came but to ashes of dung,
If maggots and rats ended
us, then Alarum! for we are betray'd,
Then indeed suspicion of
death.
Do you suspect death? if I
were to suspect death I should die now,
Do you think I could walk
pleasantly and well-suited toward
annihilation?
Pleasantly and well-suited
I walk,
Whither I walk I cannot
define, but I know it is good,
The whole universe
indicates that it is good,
The past and the present
indicate that it is good.
8. the inclusion of everyone as worthy of being
considered
To a Common Prostitute
BE composed- be at ease
with me- I am Walt Whitman, liberal and
lusty as Nature,
Not till the sun excludes
you do I exclude you,
Not till the waters refuse
to glisten for you and the leaves to
rustle for you, do my words
refuse to glisten and rustle for you.
My girl I appoint with you
an appointment, and I charge you that you
make preparation to be
worthy to meet me,
And I charge you that you
be patient and perfect till I come.
Till then I salute you with
a significant look that you do not
forget me.
9. praise of the individual
I swear I begin to see the meaning
of these things,
It is not the earth, it is
not America who is so great,
It is I who am great or to
be great, it is You up there, or any one,
It is to walk rapidly
through civilizations, governments, theories,
Through poems, pageants,
shows, to form individuals.
Underneath all,
individuals,
I swear nothing is good to
me now that ignores individuals,
The American compact is
altogether with individuals,
The only government is that
which makes minute of individuals,
The whole theory of the
universe is directed unerringly to one
single individual- namely
to You.
10. a personal relationship with the reader
And that my soul embraces you this
hour, and we affect each other
without ever seeing each
other, and never perhaps to see
each other, is every bit as
wonderful.
11. touching and sensuality
12. the body is the soul,
13. a deep respect for Abraham Lincoln
14. a positive love for life
Both I remember well--many the
hardships, few the joys, yet I was content.
15. deep loving and caring for human beings
One turns to me his appealing
eyes- poor boy! I never knew you,
Yet I think I could not
refuse this moment to die for you, if that
would save you.
Whitman produces nice snapsnots of specific scenes
which seem to include every detail.
Here, a picture of an army:
An Army Corps on the March
WITH its cloud of
skirmishers in advance,
With now the sound of a
single shot snapping like a whip, and now an
irregular volley,
The swarming ranks press on
and on, the dense brigades press on,
Glittering dimly, toiling
under the sun- the dust-cover'd men,
In columns rise and fall to
the undulations of the ground,
With artillery
interspers'd- the wheels rumble, the horses sweat,
As the army corps advances.
. . . here a moonlit night:
Look Down Fair Moon
Look down fair moon and
bathe this scene,
Pour softly down night's
nimbus floods on faces ghastly, swollen,
purple,
On the dead on their backs
with arms toss'd wide,
Pour down your unstinted
nimbus sacred moon.
and here a fishermen-on-the-beach scene:
A Paumanok Picture
Two boats with nets lying
off the sea-beach, quite still,
Ten fishermen waiting- they
discover a thick school of mossbonkers
-they drop the join'd
seine-ends in the water,
The boats separate and row
off, each on its rounding course to the
beach, enclosing the
mossbonkers,
The net is drawn in by a
windlass by those who stop ashore,
Some of the fishermen
lounge in their boats, others stand ankle-
deep in the water, pois'd
on strong legs,
The boats partly drawn up,
the water slapping against them,
Strew'd on the sand in
heaps and windrows, well out from the water,
the green-back'd spotted
mossbonkers.
The following poem from Drum-Taps, the poems of
the Civil War, is a powerful
description of a mother's deep pain of loss for
her fallen son:
Come Up from the Fields Father
COME up from the fields
father, here's a letter from our Pete,
And come to the front door
mother, here's a letter from thy dear
son.
Lo, 'tis autumn,
Lo, where the trees, deeper
green, yellower and redder,
Cool and sweeten Ohio's
villages with leaves fluttering in the
moderate wind,
Where apples ripe in the
orchards hang and grapes on the trellis'd
vines,
(Smell you the smell of the
grapes on the vines?
Smell you the buckwheat
where the bees were lately buzzing?)
Above all, lo, the sky so
calm, so transparent after the rain, and
with wondrous clouds,
Below too, all calm, all
vital and beautiful, and the farm prospers
well.
Down in the fields all
prospers well,
But now from the fields
come father, come at the daughter's call.
And come to the entry
mother, to the front door come right away.
Fast as she can she
hurries, something ominous, her steps trembling,
She does not tarry to
smooth her hair nor adjust her cap.
Open the envelope quickly,
O this is not our son's
writing, yet his name is sign'd,
O a strange hand writes for
our dear son, O stricken mother's soul!
All swims before her eyes,
flashes with black, she catches the main
words only,
Sentences broken, gunshot
wound in the breast, cavalry skirmish,
taken to hospital,
At present low, but will
soon be better.
Ah now the single figure to
me,
Amid all teeming and
wealthy Ohio with all its cities and farms,
Sickly white in the face
and dull in the head, very faint,
By the jamb of a door
leans.
Grieve not so, dear mother,
(the just-grown daughter speaks through
her sobs,
The little sisters huddle
around speechless and dismay'd,)
See, dearest mother, the
letter says Pete will soon be better.
Alas poor boy, he will
never be better, (nor may-be needs to be
better, that brave and
simple soul,)
While they stand at home at
the door he is dead already,
The only son is dead.
But the mother needs to be
better,
She with thin form
presently drest in black,
By day her meals untouch'd,
then at night fitfully sleeping, often
waking,
In the midnight waking,
weeping, longing with one deep longing,
O that she might withdraw
unnoticed, silent from life escape and
withdraw,
To follow, to seek, to be
with her dear dead son.
A rather peculiar and interesting poem was
"This Compost," a poem about soil and the
life and activity therein. "Unnamed
Lands" was a poignant tribute to the Indians (a
topic which Whitman treats from time to time,
sometimes fairly and sometimes from
quite a manifest destiny point of view).
"Miracles" is a poem full of wonder. A
great poem for children. I like how a poem
expressing the wonder of life and miracles ends
with a question.
Miracles
WHY, who makes much of a
miracle?
As to me I know of nothing
else but miracles,
Whether I walk the streets
of Manhattan,
Or dart my sight over the
roofs of houses toward the sky,
Or wade with naked feet
along the beach just in the edge of the
water,
Or stand under trees in the
woods,
Or talk by day with any one
I love, or sleep in the bed at night
with any one I love,
Or sit at table at dinner
with the rest,
Or look at strangers
opposite me riding in the car,
Or watch honey-bees busy
around the hive of a summer forenoon,
Or animals feeding in the
fields,
Or birds, or the
wonderfulness of insects in the air,
Or the wonderfulness of the
sundown, or of stars shining so quiet
and bright,
Or the exquisite delicate
thin curve of the new moon in spring;
These with the rest, one
and all, are to me miracles,
The whole referring, yet
each distinct and in its place.
To me every hour of the
light and dark is a miracle,
Every cubic inch of space
is a miracle,
Every square yard of the
surface of the earth is spread with the
same,
Every foot of the interior
swarms with the same.
To me the sea is a
continual miracle,
The fishes that swim- the
rocks- the motion of the waves- the
ships with men in them,
What stranger miracles are
there?
I also liked the odd and difficult poem "The
Sleepers." And I like the rhythm of "A
Noiseless Patient Spider" and its comparison
of a spider spinning a web and the soul
producing thoughts.
A Noiseless Patient Spider
A NOISELESS patient spider,
I mark'd where on a little
promontory it stood isolated,
Mark'd how to explore the
vacant vast surrounding,
It launch'd forth filament,
filament, filament out of itself,
Ever unreeling them, ever
tirelessly speeding them.
And you O my soul where you
stand,
Surrounded, detached, in
measureless oceans of space,
Ceaselessly musing,
venturing, throwing, seeking the spheres to
connect them,
Till the bridge you will
need be form'd, till the ductile anchor
hold,
Till the gossamer thread
you fling catch somewhere, O my soul.
I enjoyed reading the old-age poems by Whitman. He
has such a peaceful view of his
passing away from this life. Before he departs the
life he loved so well, he pauses
to give this whole-hearted and honest "thank
you" to life itself:
Thanks in Old Age
THANKS in old age- thanks
ere I go,
For health, the midday sun,
the impalpable air- for life, mere life,
For precious ever-lingering
memories, (of you my mother dear- you,
father- you, brothers,
sisters, friends,)
For all my days- not those
of peace alone- the days of war the same,
For gentle words, caresses,
gifts from foreign lands,
For shelter, wine and meat-
for sweet appreciation,
(You distant, dim unknown-
or young or old- countless, unspecified,
readers belov'd,
We never met, and neer
shall meet- and yet our souls embrace, long,
close and long;)
For beings, groups, love,
deeds, words, books- for colors, forms,
For all the brave strong
men- devoted, hardy men- who've forward
sprung in freedom's help,
all years, all lands
For braver, stronger, more
devoted men- (a special laurel ere I go,
to life's war's chosen
ones,
The cannoneers of song and
thought-the great artillerists- the
foremost leaders, captains
of the soul:)
As soldier from an ended
war return'd- As traveler out of myriads,
to the long procession
retrospective,
Thanks- joyful thanks!- a
soldier's, traveler's thanks.
Edward Tanguay
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